초등영어 와 성인영어 비교

초등영어와 성인영어 표현의 차이

물론 "말"에는 레벨이 있을 수는 없다. 초등학생이 사용하는 표현을 성인도 당연히 사용하기 때문이다.

초등학생이 동화나 문학책을 더 많이 읽을 수도 있기 때문에 표현이나 디테일에 있어서는 초등학생이 성인보다 더 강할 수도하지만 성인이 삶과 경험이 쌓이게 되면, 아무래도 상황에 맞는 표현은 더 잘할 수 밖에 없다. 경험의 세월때문이라 생각한다.

이에 몇가지 상황에서의 초등학생의 영어표현과 성인 영어 표현을 비교하고자 한다. 물론 성인이 영어를 좀 한다고 했을 때를 가정해서.....

먼저 독후감을 쓴다고 가정할 때와 새로운 신상품의 결과를 간단하게 위 상사에게 보고할 때의 차이를 예를 들고자 한다.

Child's Report:

Hey boss! So, we made this super cool thing called Product A. It's like a magical gadget that does awesome stuff! You press buttons, and it lights up and makes funny sounds. It's like having a mini party in your hands! We tested it, and all our friends love it. I think everyone will want one! It's so much fun!

Adult's Report:

Subject: Product A Launch Report

Dear [Superior],

I am pleased to present the results of our recent endeavor, Product A. The innovative device boasts an engaging interface with dynamic functionality. User feedback indicates a strong appeal, particularly in its interactive features. Initial testing demonstrates a high level of user satisfaction, highlighting the potential market demand. We recommend proceeding with the planned launch, anticipating positive reception and substantial market impact.

Best regards, [Your Name]

초등학생의 영어는 좀 더 문어체이며 직설적이다. 그러한 이유는 대략적으로 아래 이유가 있다.

1. 인지 발달: 초등학교 어린이들은 여전히 ​​언어 능력과 인지 능력을 발달시키고 있는 상황이다. 그들의 글은 더 직설적인 경향이 있으며 성인 글에서 볼 수 있는 복잡성과 뉘앙스가 부족할 수 있다.
2. 교육적 노출: 성인은 수년간의 교육과 전문적인 경험을 통해 다양한 글쓰기 스타일에 노출되지만 아이들은 전문적인 환경에서 형식적이고 구조화된 언어를 사용하는 데 노출이 덜 된 상황이라,  더 간단하고 구어적인 표현을 사용하는 경향이 더 큽니다.
3. 사회화 및 성숙도: 성인은 자신의 성숙도와 직업적 지위를 반영하여 더욱 세련되고 공식적인 방식으로 의사소통해야 한다. 반면에 아이들은 여전히 ​​사회적 규범을 탐색하고 있으며 현재 발달 단계를 반영하는 언어를 사용할 수 있다
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5. 커뮤니케이션 목적: 커뮤니케이션 목적도 중요한 역할을 합니다. 성인들은 정보를 제공하거나 전문적인 목적으로 글을 쓰는 경우가 많으므로 좀 더 격식을 갖춘 스타일이 필요하지만, 아이들은 글을 쓸 때 개인적인 표현이나 동료들에게 단순한 생각을 전달하는 데 중점을 두어 보다 구어적인 어조로 이어질 수 있다.

시험이나 숙제가 아니라 대충 표현하기 보다는 책을 쓰는 것처럼 좋은 표현을 찾아 쓰도록 노력해야한다. 초등영어는 어린이의 눈높이에 맞는 표현과 문장 구조가 특색이나, 성인이더라도 영어가 기초인 경우 단순하게 쓰게 되면 영어가 늘지 않게 된다. 그런 이유로 나이와 목적에 맞는 영어표현을 접하는게 좋고, 특히 취업을 해야하는 경우에는 문학책 보다는 내가 원하는 직무와 연관된 영어표현이 들어간 글을 많이 읽는게 좋다. 아래는 문학을 읽고 영어 독후감을 쓸때 초등여어와 성인영어의 차이를 보여준다.

먼저 초등영어와 성인영어의 차이를 간단하게 설명드리면,

1. 어휘의 발달

초등 영어 초기 단계에서는 일상 활동, 색상, 가족을 중심으로 기본 어휘를 파악합니다. 간단한 문장이 많습니다.

성인 영어 실력이 늘어남에 따라 어휘력도 늘어납니다. 성인은 복잡한 단어, 숙어, 미묘한 표현을 의사소통에 원활하게 통합하여 깊이와 정확성을 모두 향상시킵니다.

2. 문장 구조의 정교함

초등 영어 간단한 문장이 지배적이며 종종 주어-동사-목적어 구조를 중심으로 구성됩니다. 동사 시제는 상대적으로 복잡하지 않습니다.

성인 영어 문장 구조가 발전함에 따라 정교함이 나타납니다. 성인은 명확성과 스타일을 위해 다양한 문장 구조를 사용하여 복잡한 문법적 뉘앙스를 능숙하게 탐색합니다.

3. 사회적 맥락 인식

초등 영어 초기 학습자는 기본적인 사회적 상호 작용과 인사말에 중점을 두고 기본적인 대화 기술을 개발합니다.

성인 영어 성인 영어에 능숙하려면 사회적 맥락, 문화적 뉘앙스, 적절한 언어 구사에 대한 예리한 이해가 필요합니다. 어조와 형식의 미묘한 변화가 제2의 천성이 됩니다.

4. 생각과 의견 표현

초등 영어 좋아하는 것, 싫어하는 것, 선호하는 것의 기본적인 표현은 미묘한 의견을 표현하는 능력이 제한된 초기 단계를 나타냅니다.

성인 영어 능숙한 연사는 미묘한 생각을 표현하고, 토론에 참여하고, 의견을 정확하게 전달하는 기술을 숙달합니다. 그들은 다양한 관점을 존중하면서 토론을 능숙하게 탐색합니다.

5. 독해 및 비판적 분석

초등 영어 초보자는 간단한 텍스트, 기초적인 읽기 기술 및 이해력을 키우는 데 중점을 둡니다.

성인 영어 성숙한 언어 사용자는 복잡한 텍스트를 다루고 더 깊은 의미를 쉽게 추출하고 비판적 분석에 참여합니다. 그들은 다양한 문학 장르를 쉽게 탐색합니다.

6. 문화적 감수성과 미묘한 의사소통

초등 영어 초기 학습자는 기본적인 의사소통 필수 사항에 초점을 맞춰 문화적 미묘함을 간과할 수 있습니다.

성인 영어 언어 능력은 단어 이상으로 확장됩니다. 그것은 문화적 감수성을 포함합니다. 성인은 언어 선택이 다양한 청중에게 미치는 영향을 인식하면서 의사소통합니다.

아래는 초등영어 와 성인영어로 된 독후감이니 어휘와 표현을 비교하시기 바랍니다. 

For the 3rd Grade Elementary Level:

 

I just read a book called "Charlotte's Web" and it was so cool! It's about a pig named Wilbur and a spider named Charlotte who become friends. Charlotte saves Wilbur's life by writing words in her web that make people think Wilbur is special, so they don't want to eat him. Wilbur learns about the cycle of life and death, and Charlotte teaches him to be brave.

 

The book is great because it has talking animals, and it teaches us to be kind and brave. It's a little sad at the end, but it has a happy ending too. I would recommend this book to everyone who loves animals.

 

For the Educated Adult:

 

I recently finished reading "Charlotte's Web" by E.B. White, and I was struck by the simplicity and depth of the story. The book is about a pig named Wilbur who befriends a spider named Charlotte. Together, they face the realities of life and death in a barnyard setting.

 

What struck me about the book was how White manages to convey complex ideas about life, death, and the cycle of nature in a way that is accessible to children. The story is also a testament to the power of friendship and loyalty, as Charlotte goes to great lengths to save Wilbur's life.

 

"Charlotte's Web" is a classic children's book that has stood the test of time. It is a great example of how literature can convey important ideas in a way that is both entertaining and educational. I would recommend this book not only to children but also to anyone who appreciates a well-written and timeless story.

 

 

For the 3rd Grade Elementary Level:

 

Do you know why reading a book is so good? It's because books can take you on an adventure! When you read a book, you can go to new places and meet new people without ever leaving your house. You can learn about history, science, or even make-believe worlds.

 

Reading is also good for your brain! It helps you learn new words and understand new ideas. And it can make you smarter too! The more you read, the more you know, and the better you'll do in school.

 

So next time you're bored, pick up a book and get lost in a new adventure. It's good for your brain and it's a lot of fun!

 

For the Educated Adult:

 

Reading a book is one of the most beneficial things you can do for your mind and your soul. Not only does reading improve your vocabulary, but it also improves your critical thinking and problem-solving skills.

 

Studies have shown that reading can reduce stress and improve your overall well-being. When you read, your brain releases endorphins that make you feel good, much like when you exercise. In fact, reading has been shown to be as relaxing as listening to music or taking a walk.

 

In addition to the mental and emotional benefits, reading can also broaden your horizons. By reading books from different genres and cultures, you can gain a deeper understanding of the world around you.

 

Overall, reading a book is good for your brain, your emotions, and your personal growth. So pick up a book today and start reaping the benefits!

 

For the 3rd Grade Elementary Level:

 

Money is important because it helps us buy things we need and want. We need money to buy food, clothes, and a place to live. We also want money to buy toys, games, and other fun stuff.

 

But money isn't just about buying things. It's also about being able to do things we want to do. For example, if we want to go on a trip or do an activity, we need money to pay for it.

 

Money can be tricky sometimes, but it's important to learn about it so we can make good choices. We should save our money for things we really want, and we should spend it wisely.

 

Remember, money is important, but it's not the most important thing in life. We should also value our friends, family, and experiences.

 

For the Educated Adult:

 

Money is undeniably important in our lives. It allows us to meet our basic needs, such as food, shelter, and clothing. It also gives us the ability to enjoy the finer things in life, such as travel, entertainment, and leisure activities.

 

Beyond its material benefits, money also provides a sense of security and stability. With money, we can plan for the future, invest in our education or career, and create a comfortable life for ourselves and our loved ones.

 

However, it's important to recognize that money is not the only source of happiness or success. Studies have shown that beyond a certain point, money does not significantly contribute to our overall well-being or life satisfaction.

 

Ultimately, the importance of money lies in how we use it. It's important to be responsible with our money, saving and investing wisely, and using it to create a fulfilling and meaningful life.

4th Grade Level:

I love playing soccer with my friends. It's always so much fun running around and chasing the ball. Yesterday, we had a big game against our rivals. I was scared at first, but my coach told me to pass the ball and keep it away from the other team. Doing that helped me score the winning goal. I felt so happy and proud when my teammates cheered. After the game, we went out to eat pizza together. We had a great time talking and laughing about our favorite parts of the game.

For 4th grade level, I would suggest using more descriptive adjectives to help bring the story to life. For example, you could describe the game as "intense" or "exciting," and the pizza as "yummy" or "delicious."

6th Grade Level:

Playing soccer with my friends is one of my favorite things to do. There's nothing like the rush of running after the ball and scoring a goal. Yesterday, we had a huge game against our rivals. I was nervous at first, but my coach gave me some great advice: "Focus on passing the ball and keeping possession." Taking his advice, I played my best and ended up scoring the winning goal. Hearing my teammates cheer and seeing their smiles made me feel proud of myself. After the game, we celebrated by going out to eat pizza together. Everyone was laughing and talking about their favorite moments from the game.

For 6th grade level, I would suggest using more complex adjectives to paint a more vivid picture. For example, you could describe the game as "tense" or "competitive," and the pizza as "mouth-watering" or "scrumptious."

Adult Level:

Playing soccer with my friends is one of the most exhilarating experiences I know. The thrill of sprinting after the ball and scoring a goal is unparalleled. Yesterday, we faced off against our arch rivals in a high-stakes game. Although I was initially apprehensive, my coach's sage advice to "focus on passing the ball and maintaining possession" proved invaluable. Channeling my determination and skill, I played my heart out and ultimately clinched the winning goal. The sound of my teammates' raucous cheering and the sight of their jubilant faces filled me with a deep sense of pride and fulfillment. After the game, we basked in the warm glow of victory over steaming slices of delicious pizza, regaling one another with tales of our most memorable moments.